Pariah
Number of posts : 117 Age : 61 Location : Rainforest, USA Reputation : 0 Kudos : 0 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: stuff 3rd June 2008, 17:50 | |
| leftover I saw you singing some old song the rest of us forgot. I turned away, ashamed, hurrying past. But there you are, in my mind. I should have asked, where you been. Would you teach me the song? Maybe I'll teach you mine.
Float Vessel that holds the sky, mirror'd moods of swirling seasons leaves floating, gently rippling the sky. looking down, I see up. So calm, fluid, storing the seasons. I want to be a part. I dream of diving, swimming down, floating lazily through the layers of consciousness. Each ripple widens, touching each other, reaching the shore. I feel it inside me, part of me, in my cells, in my blood, the sky reflected divinity expressed. Which is a reflection, and which is real?
Windwalking Nothing's right, but then nothing's really wrong. Something has been left behind, like waking after a dream, but not remembering. The hope for tomorrows turned into yesterdays written on the wind's anxious pacing’s
PARTition The sea refuses no river, and yet gives itself to the clouds. Rivers move mountains, and yet follow the path of least resistance. Sand is soft, and yet wears away the cliff. Seeking to be unseen, I sit still in the spinning universe. Seeking to be, I breathe, dissolving the boundaries. The wind cannot be seen, and yet gives the tree great strength. God is all, and yet says only, "I AM"
Silt Like a landscape after a flood Nothing is right, covered in grey Things don't seem to work Sodden, my spirit can't rise What's wrong, my eyes? Feet of clay stumble, Heavy with each step, Muscles ache seems they will tear. Sand in my socks cold, wet feet. The scene is flat, pallid. How I wish I could taste light again, See the sound running down my chin. Oh for the colors, light split open, A joyous sound on my skin. The lightness of laughter, I'm flying again. | |
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Brianna Admin
Number of posts : 2402 Age : 54 Location : Southeastern PA Reputation : 14 Kudos : 182 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: Re: stuff 3rd June 2008, 18:21 | |
| I really like your writing Pariah, I really think you have a talent ;) | |
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Pariah
Number of posts : 117 Age : 61 Location : Rainforest, USA Reputation : 0 Kudos : 0 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: TX 4th June 2008, 00:54 | |
| Thank you, Brianna! I appreciate ALL the nice comments. You all are too good to me!! luv an hugs jp | |
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Heather
Number of posts : 1975 Age : 49 Location : SE Minnesota Reputation : 0 Kudos : 5 Registration date : 2008-05-24
| Subject: Re: stuff 4th June 2008, 02:48 | |
| I agree, thanks so much for sharing with us!! | |
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mustang302
Number of posts : 1806 Age : 58 Location : cibertron Reputation : 5 Kudos : 253 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: Re: stuff 4th June 2008, 13:00 | |
| yes, thanks for sharing!!! | |
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terry
Number of posts : 2498 Age : 69 Reputation : 1 Kudos : 263 Registration date : 2008-05-30
| Subject: Re: stuff 4th June 2008, 19:54 | |
| Yes, your writing is very good. | |
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