dancingkat
Number of posts : 100 Age : 47 Location : Paradise, Texas Reputation : 0 Kudos : 12 Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: war of hearts 15th June 2008, 06:11 | |
| my most recent poem written about 5 months ago i think when i went through a rough patch
Time is sliding behind the clock. There is a pain inside me. Life slaps me in the face to mock The voice says bones are the key.
Yet there is never sign to stop Its a rat race till the end. Up is down and bottom is top A false wall that's just pretend.
Down and down into the dark lies She wraps you around the night. The place where one's soul never dies And you no longer will fight.
My heart goes through a pyschic war The pain just never will end. The knife is driven to my core Flagged by the past evil sins.
I must deserve this mental hell Even though I see the door. A small exit that I know well Why cant I let myself soar?
I keep going back for more pain With sweet words upon my lips. I know in this war I'm insane pains I suffer for that kiss | |
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Brianna Admin
Number of posts : 2402 Age : 54 Location : Southeastern PA Reputation : 14 Kudos : 182 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: Re: war of hearts 15th June 2008, 07:39 | |
| Very powerful Kat. You write really well too. | |
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Kira
Number of posts : 403 Age : 65 Reputation : 0 Kudos : 0 Registration date : 2008-05-24
| Subject: Re: war of hearts 15th June 2008, 08:09 | |
| Beautiful hon, thanks for sharing | |
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dancingkat
Number of posts : 100 Age : 47 Location : Paradise, Texas Reputation : 0 Kudos : 12 Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: war of hearts 16th June 2008, 08:38 | |
| i have written poetry since i was very young and i like to think of poetry as a pattern of words that are like music and also a puzzle in how they are put together and flow. | |
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deltaelise
Number of posts : 238 Age : 71 Location : Southeast Oklahoma Reputation : 0 Kudos : 0 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: Re: war of hearts 16th June 2008, 10:45 | |
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Pariah
Number of posts : 117 Age : 61 Location : Rainforest, USA Reputation : 0 Kudos : 0 Registration date : 2008-05-23
| Subject: cool 16th June 2008, 11:50 | |
| I LIKE your description of poetry! It fits. You write very well and I hope you keep posting! john | |
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terry
Number of posts : 2498 Age : 69 Reputation : 1 Kudos : 263 Registration date : 2008-05-30
| Subject: Re: war of hearts 16th June 2008, 17:04 | |
| Very nice, and I can relate so well. | |
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mustang302
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| Subject: Re: war of hearts 17th June 2008, 16:04 | |
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