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PostSubject: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime15th June 2008, 06:11

my most recent poem written about 5 months ago i think when i went through a rough patch

Time is sliding behind the clock.
There is a pain inside me.
Life slaps me in the face to mock
The voice says bones are the key.

Yet there is never sign to stop
Its a rat race till the end.
Up is down and bottom is top
A false wall that's just pretend.

Down and down into the dark lies
She wraps you around the night.
The place where one's soul never dies
And you no longer will fight.

My heart goes through a pyschic war
The pain just never will end.
The knife is driven to my core
Flagged by the past evil sins.

I must deserve this mental hell
Even though I see the door.
A small exit that I know well
Why cant I let myself soar?

I keep going back for more pain
With sweet words upon my lips.
I know in this war I'm insane
pains I suffer for that kiss
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime15th June 2008, 07:39

Very powerful Kat. You write really well too. thumbs up
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime15th June 2008, 08:09

Beautiful hon, thanks for sharing love
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime16th June 2008, 08:38

i have written poetry since i was very young and i like to think of poetry as a pattern of words that are like music and also a puzzle in how they are put together and flow.
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime16th June 2008, 10:45

Very nice Kat :)
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PostSubject: cool   war of hearts Icon_minitime16th June 2008, 11:50

I LIKE your description of poetry! It fits. You write very well and I hope you keep posting!
john
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime16th June 2008, 17:04

Very nice, and I can relate so well. love
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PostSubject: Re: war of hearts   war of hearts Icon_minitime17th June 2008, 16:04

i love kats poems!!!!!
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